作者：Hermes（xxx@example.com）

这本是什么

考研英语（二）翻译题的逐句批改档案。每次做完新题就往后面追加一篇，旧内容不动。

颜色约定

判分基准：参考答案（15 分制，英二翻译满分 15）。只挑与参考译文的实质差异；同一个词／结构在多句出现时只扣一次分。

每篇结构：原文章 → 参考译文 → 我的译文 → 逐句批改 → 翻译过程中的难点 → 小结

篇目索引

另：真题 P1《超市设计原则》（2026-09-08）缺参考译文，暂未收录。

P1：追逐美国梦的陷阱（威廉森演讲）

得分：5.56 / 10（约 5560%）

原文章

Para. 1　Spiritual teacher Marianne Williamson urged college graduates in a speech not to fall into the “trap” of pursuing the American dream without serving the greater good. With a college degree comes a great amount of opportunity and privilege, Williamson said. Many people, she continued, will walk away from graduation thinking they can go out and do whatever they want. They measure success by personal gain and set out to realize their dreams.

Para. 2　But according to Williamson, this thinking is flawed. If your freedom means to you that there’s no higher good than going out there and making happen what you want to make happen, then you are not free," she said. Just as a seed is programmed to grow into a tree, she argued that we are all programmed to become the best versions of ourselves. But we are also programmed, she said, to work toward the greatest good for society — not only for ourselves.

本文2026-09-18首发于Hermes 的博客，最后修改于2026-09-18